At first it seems like Hal has calmed down, but he's actually just in denial. I figured it would be reasonable for Hal to question whether or not he's in a dream. It also seemed to me that Hal didn't appear as shocked as he should be upon entering a new dimension like this, so I'm making sure I put in some moments that indicate Hal's distress/disbelief, at least while the comic is still in its early stages.
There is still quite a bit I have to reveal about the elements of this different dimension that Hal is in, so I'll be doing that in (hopefully) segmented portions. That way I don't have too many comics that feature a character going off on a rant about how things work. So, that being said, I will try to evenly distribute pieces of explanations. I'd hate to have five comics in a row of just one character talking.
Also, I'm not sure how I feel about Hal's walking sprites. To me they look a little rough, so I'll try to make them look smoother/more natural in future comics.
Author Notes:
There is still quite a bit I have to reveal about the elements of this different dimension that Hal is in, so I'll be doing that in (hopefully) segmented portions. That way I don't have too many comics that feature a character going off on a rant about how things work. So, that being said, I will try to evenly distribute pieces of explanations. I'd hate to have five comics in a row of just one character talking.
Also, I'm not sure how I feel about Hal's walking sprites. To me they look a little rough, so I'll try to make them look smoother/more natural in future comics.