He's in Denial

25th Sep 2013, 12:32 PM in Chapter 2 - A Day at Braeden Stronghold
He's in Denial
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25th Sep 2013, 12:32 PM
Distance
At first it seems like Hal has calmed down, but he's actually just in denial. I figured it would be reasonable for Hal to question whether or not he's in a dream. It also seemed to me that Hal didn't appear as shocked as he should be upon entering a new dimension like this, so I'm making sure I put in some moments that indicate Hal's distress/disbelief, at least while the comic is still in its early stages.

There is still quite a bit I have to reveal about the elements of this different dimension that Hal is in, so I'll be doing that in (hopefully) segmented portions. That way I don't have too many comics that feature a character going off on a rant about how things work. So, that being said, I will try to evenly distribute pieces of explanations. I'd hate to have five comics in a row of just one character talking.

Also, I'm not sure how I feel about Hal's walking sprites. To me they look a little rough, so I'll try to make them look smoother/more natural in future comics.

Comments:

28th Sep 2013, 4:19 PM
ranger_brianna_new
They may not be as good as you want them to be, but they seem good enough to me. :)
8th Oct 2013, 12:03 AM
Bleach and Cloth
I agree. I think he plays to his chosen style and strengths well.